Tales from Tamriel
Well, the only mistake in this chapter is Page 3 at the bottom. "Niskan felt encouraged by two things." is how it starts.
So far though, you have me drawn in. These are great.
Fixed. Very happy to hear you like it to this point. I hope you enjoy the adventures to come!
Awesome! When you are finished, you could make a book! Waiting for next chapter!
Such an awesome series! I can't wait for the next one. Please, keep up the great work.